Monday 11 August 2008

Writting essay 2

“INCREASED USE OF SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY TO FIGHT CRIME IS AN INFRINGEMNET ON PERSONAL PRIVACY.” To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Technology and science to fight crime could hopefully make people feel more safe in there day to day lives, be it traveling on public transport, shopping with their family or being a student or an artist living in an environment or a certain area to get themselves to another level in their careers which may be unsafe.
In general “if you have nothing to hide then you have nothing to worry about”. But I can relate to maybe a conspiracy that everybody needs or should have their own privacy protected. But in these times its very unfortunate that in our environment we have to survive within this idea. In general speaking people need inner peace and this seems a simple and realistic option. But I can understand a feeling of insecurity or of being possibly “monitored or watched” but I guess it’s the modern times quick solution to this drawback. So in this essay I would like to give you the fact that science and technology to fight crime is a positive, because crime has got bigger and more threatening and people are now more sensitive to this within the world. This should never prevent honest people moving forwards within their lives in harmony. This process does not have to be an invasion of a persons privacy, it can act as a huge prevention to people creating crimes or insecurity in our general day to day life.

These days, science and technology plays such an vital role in modern policing. Here is a variety selection of scientific and technological tools in police system: DNA database, Police National Computer (PNC), CCTV, Fingerprint, Road traffic law enforcement technology and maybe lots more. This new technology systems make possible for officers to use more time engaging with people and less time to fight crime activity. These new technology helps enduring to decrease burglary, vehicle crime, robbery and drug-related crime. A recent examples of this is the national DNA database, which has revolutionized crime detection. The UK leads the world in the application of DNA technology to the identification of criminal. However, the increased of use of science and technology by organized crime and terrorism means we have to ensure that the police have access to the sophisticated technology their need to stay one step a head.

1 comment:

Steve said...

Looks good. See one or two changes IN CAPS.

Technology and science to fight crime could hopefully make people feel more safe in THEIR day to day lives, be it traveling on public transport, shopping with their family or being a student or an artist living in an environment or a certain area to get themselves to another level in their careers which may be unsafe.

In general “if you have nothing to hide then you have nothing to worry about”. But I can relate to maybe a conspiracy that everybody needs or should have their own privacy protected. But in these times its very unfortunate that in our environment we have to survive within this idea. In general speaking people need inner peace and this seems a simple and realistic option. But I can understand a feeling of insecurity or of being possibly “monitored or watched” but I guess [THIS NEEDS TO BE WRITTEN MORE FORMALLY: EG 'HOWEVER, ONE COULD ARGUE THAT...']it’s the modern times quick solution to this drawback. So in this essay I would like to give you [TOO INFORMAL] the fact that science and technology to fight crime is a positive, because crime has got bigger and more threatening and people are now more sensitive to this within the world.

NEW PARAGRAPH

CRIME should never prevent honest people moving forwards within their lives in harmony. This process does not have to be an invasion of a persons privacy, it can act as a huge prevention to people creating crimes or insecurity in our general day to day life. These days, science and technology plays such an vital role in modern policing. Here is a variety selection of scientific and technological tools in police system: DNA database, Police National Computer (PNC), CCTV, Fingerprint, Road traffic law enforcement technology and maybe lots more. This new technology systems make IT possible for officers to use more time engaging with people and less time FIGHTING crime activity. These new technologIES helps enduring [??] to decrease burglary, vehicle crime, robbery and drug-related crime. A recent examples of this is the national DNA database, which has revolutionized crime detection. The UK leads the world in the application of DNA technology to the identification of criminal.

However, the increased of use of science and technology by organized crime and terrorism means we have to ensure that the police have access to the sophisticated technology their need to stay one step a head.